royalguard96 wrote:
Agree and disagree.
Ep. 8 and 9 should be focused on telling the story of 8 and 9, not filling us in on what happened between 6-7. If 8-9 focus too much on the 6-7 gap, it will have exposed the storytelling failures of Ep. 7. Some/any back story - since there was virtually none - would have improved Ep. 7's biggest weakness and that being the utter lack of exposition for the audience. ANH perfectly balanced fast movement of the story with backstory exposition, the best examples being the Death Star conference room scenes: "The Emperor has dissolved the council permanently...." etc. etc.
I think greater exposition on a galaxy-wide scale would have helped the film immensely. Earlier establishment of Starkiller Base, just a line or two describing that the Hosnian system was the "new Coruscant." That way, Starkiller Base's presence and threat is more fleshed out and a sense of true loss is felt at the Hosnian system's destruction. Lucas's input here would have been crucial. Those details were a huge strength of his.
However, I agree that detailing the guts of Ren's fall to the dark can be left out of the films. Ep. 7 establishes him as an evil, but unstable former Jedi apprentice. He's already dark, so leave that sub-story to the comics and novels to tell. I have no doubt Ren's story is a painful and powerful one, one I sure as hell hope finds its way into the hands of a talented writer who can use the medium of a novel to give it the proper weight and detail (Matthew Stover, please).
I didn't put enough meat on the bones of my post, so I absolutely agree with your first point. I meant that the backstories hinted at in 7 will be more fully fleshed out in 8 and 9; the same way things hinted at in ANH were further explored in ESB, and so on.
I do agree with you that more exposition explaining galactic politics would help the film, but it relates back to what is the biggest problem with TFA to begin with: Starkiller. If there was no 'we need to blow up the Republic with a superweapon' subplot we would not need to care about the state of galactic politics. I'm not sure the solution is as easy as dropping a scene or two earlier in the film. You'd still be counting on the audience to pick up a minor detail, critical to the plot, that could be easily missed. (First rule of sales: tell them, tell them again, and then tell them again. In other words, your story needs to be clear as day).
For us to care about the Hosnian system's destruction at least one of our main characters needs to be deeply invested in its fate. We can't use Leia because we need to save her for a grand reveal after the battle of Tokodana, which takes place after the system has been destroyed. We could use Poe, but what's the context? Rey doesn't give a shit or know the Republic from atom, and Finn is a recent turncoat. There is no doubt that this is a narrative issue with the film. ANH succeeds because its McGuffin and characters are both directly (and personally) invested in destroying the Death Star. It's set up by the first lines of the crawl. TFA's McGuffin has to do with finding Luke, and its main characters are invested in finding Luke from frame one. The Starkiller plot on the other hand has nothing to do with any of our main characters and thus, we won't ever care about the Starkiller's targets or its destruction. This can't be fixed with just a scene or two: you'd need a total rewrite. In my eyes it should have been totally scrapped from the script.
Then again, this is big blockbuster entertainment and the filmmakers needed a boss battle with something to go boom at the end. Hence we have an undercooked plot.
I am not philosophically opposed to a bigger, badder Death Star. Although the device is tired, it still makes a ton of sense that a military dictatorship would need a super weapon to control the galaxy.
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And yes: Fans where begging for The Clone Wars...they where wondering what it was all about...at least from what I learned from first Generation fans.
We cared in a "wouldn't that be cool to know more about what the Clone Wars was" kind of way. Not in a "the plot of this movie doesn't work unless I know what the Clone Wars is" way.