ChosenGuy
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I am currently writing a fan-fic but I've only started doing bits of dialogue and haven't fleshed anything out as of yet but tell me what you think.
STAR WARS: CLONE WARS - THE SHADOW OF TYRANNY
ANAKIN:
Chancellor Palpatine! It feels so good to be back on familiar territory. I've missed your guidance.
PALPATINE:
It is a joy to see you alive and well. The Jedi Order, to be frank, have been at a loss without your guidance,
my young friend. How were the negotiations on Lukeeto?
ANAKIN:
Tough. I managed to located Senator Ukelo but his aides were too gaurded. Even for a Jedi.
PALPATINE:
That is unfortunate. Where is the Senator now?
ANAKIN:
I turned him over to the authorities. He knows very little, if anything, of Count Dooku's movements.
I did find a stronghold on Lukeeto but I will have to return with a clone assembly. I couldn't
gain access on my own.
PALPATINE:
You have done well. I am very proud. Will you come to my office at dawn? I have another assignment for you.
Something that I feel only you can accomplish.
ANAKIN:
Yes sir. I am glad you see my ability without prejudiced eyes. Unlike my council.
PALPATINE:
The Jedi Order are living in the past. I forsee it being their unfortunate downfall.
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OBI-WAN:
The longer this war rages on, the harder it will be to sustain who is controlling it. I am still
anxious to find out what Count Dooku meant by the senate being in control of a Sith Lord.
It doesn't make any sense.
YODA:
Hmm, complex this puzzle is. General Grevious, have you found?
OBI-WAN:
Not yet, Master Yoda. My spies on Dantooine have reported sightings but nothing solid.
Perhaps Anakin and I can travel there?
YODA:
Young Skywalker, impressionable he is. This mission, alone must be completed.
MACE WINDU:
Yoda is right, Obi-Wan. I don't think having Anakin with you would be a good idea. We need him
to keep watch on the Chancellors dealings. There is something amiss.
OBI-WAN:
I am worried about him. His relationship with the Chancellor has made him more arrogant, more
in line with the propoganda of this war, he is agreeing with what will ultimately become a dictatorship.
YODA:
A worry this is but with time will be resolved. Now, find the General. For questioning, you will bring.
The Force, may it be with you.
OBI-WAN:
May the force be with you..
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ANAKIN:
I want to go with you! I don't need to be babysat, Obi-Wan. I handled everything on Lukeeto...
OBI-WAN:
Lukeeto? What are you talking about?
ANAKIN:
Nothing Master. Why don't the Council trust me?
OBI-WAN:
They trust you, Anakin, but you are needed on Coruscant. For the moment at least.
Anakin, can I take your ship? Mine sustained a lot of damage on Bork.
ANAKIN:
Umm...sure...I guess. I'll need to repair the hyperdrive..
OBI-WAN:
It's ok, I am only going to Dantooine, it's less than a par-sec away. The Hyperdrive isn't needed.
I'll contact you, I promise.
ANAKIN:
Ok, I'll go back to my office job! May the force be with you, Master!
OBI-WAN:
Anakin!
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OBI-WAN:
Why was Anakin sent to Lukeeto? Hitcher, can you hyperlink into the trajectory files on Anakins ship for me?
I want to access the recordings.
HITCHER: Sure thing, give me a sec. Ok, The trajectory file isn't here, General. It seems that the Chancellor ordered the trip to Lukeeto. The storage hold was used, the cargo wasorganic. Wait, this looks like a senatorial key-pass..It belongs to Senator Ukelo of the Byss system.
OBI-WAN:
Why was Anakin bringing the senator here? in cargo?
HITCHER:
There is nothing else coming up. Maybe Anakin took the file?
OBI-WAN:
I'll find out..
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OBI-WAN:
Anakin, why were you sent to Lukeeto? What were you doing there??
ANAKIN:
Chancellor Palpatine sent me there to spy on the Seperatists. It was a diplomatic mission only.
OBI-WAN:
If it was diplomatic then why was Senator Ukelo brought back in cargo? We'd have ordered
a corvette for that!
ANAKIN:
Ukelo is working for Dooku! I arrested him, Master. He may know something of Dooku's movements.
OBI-WAN:
Anakin, you are becoming too entrapped in the senate and it's machinations. I order you to stay with me from
now on. No more dealings with Palpatine. Do you understand?
ANAKIN:
Master, I am doing what you should - bringing the Seperatist Movement to an end, instead of sitting on your
council and thinking too much. You should be proud of me! I am the chosen one right?!.
OBI-WAN:
Then act like it! Listen to your council, me!.
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PALPATINE:
My boy, Master Kenobi doesn't understand you, I do. I used to hold great trust in the Jedi Order but after recent
events that trust is slipping away. Anakin, as a Jedi Knight, I know you are the only one who can make some
sense out of this tradegy. Do you regret becoming a Jedi?
ANAKIN:
I've always dreamt of being here, on Coruscant, learning the ways of the force. But now I just feel I am
being used as a pawn in a game. I have no faith in Master Windu just as he has no faith in me, I could sense
that as a boy.
PALPATINE:
I've always hated the fact they kept you away from Tatooine. The loss of your mother was a horrible, unfortunate incident.
I did try to get them to honour you a break away from the Jedi Order but Master Windu refused outright. He said it was too
dangerous for your mind to be clouded by the love of your mother...
ANAKIN:
He said that?? How could he? Why?!
PALPATINE:
They fear you Anakin. They know that you will bring balance to the force but they won't allow you the freedom to do so.
One day, I'll tell you the tale of the great Darth Pleigius but now it's time for you to rest. I want you to go to Tatooine,
see your step brother. Take some time away ok?. I'll see to it that the Jedi Council honour this.
ANAKIN:
Thank you very much, Chancellor. You are a great mentor.
