I like the ideas and concepts, but the way it is presented seems wrong. It doesn't seem that Anakin would take it on straight away. MACE must know something that Anakin doesn't for him to kill him, IMO.

Using the Mace/Qui-Gon ideals would be better suited to have Anakin choose during the fight scene rather than this one confrontation.

Isn't Carl Cunningham a part of Starwasfan.org? Carl Cunningham was allegedly on the set of Episode III during preproduction and/or principal photography.

I still can't see how the twins are a threat to the Emperor...even this tale doesn't really give a reason why. Isn't it suppose to be about the twins??